This was the second draft feedback I got from YouTube:
THIRD DRAFT:
My third draft of my music video, it does not differ hugely from my second draft except I have taken the 'film grain/old age' effect away from it. This was because I didn't believe it looked very professional and my new cut of 'the girlfriend' looking in the mirror from my second draft makes it clear that it is Ollie's thoughts from the past. I also very slightly changed the lip syncing to make it more professional.
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