After looking at all of my audience feedback it was clear that there was a lot to be done to make my video more successful, especially making the story line more obvious for the audience as it wouldn't look professional if the video was confusing. Because of this, I used some extra footage I had to take the 'spinning' clip out so it was obvious that Ollie was 'invisible'. I have also used an 'ease in' effect to get rid of the tripod at the start as well as putting a 'film grain' effect on the "past" clips. I hope my second draft is more successful.
To promote my second draft, I again used social networking sites:
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